Monday, April 17, 2017

tom and wanda in the diner dialogue

came to me tonight, in the same chair and time that sam. and willow rolled through recently.

and again on yellow legal pad.

the nuts and bolts but it'll all be intact when i type it up.

much briefer than previous versions. tighter.

becky their waitress asks about how square dance class went.

she sees hawaii imagery on wanda's tablet, thus introducing their upcoming vacation.

and turns out tom IS serious about maybe taking a surfing lesson at waikiki.

wonders if they'll get lei'd when they get there.

anyway. feels good and for the record.

another portion of pickup painted.

and mo' "better" from


waiting for it.


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