Friday, January 27, 2017

A Love Story 29: what are you afraid of

As this is not so much plot-driven, and is nuance-heavy, the subtleties of dialogue and body language a requisite re: furthering and deepening, blah blah, et cetera, I find myself making a point to write down "talking points" as they occur to me.


And what did in that regard now is, post-sex, they take a walk 'round the Boat Haven, wind making music of the boat riggings, the call of gulls. Ken and Carole hand in hand.


She asks him:


What are you afraid of?



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